Fantastic Room 21 Writing

Yesterday I made up a game. It was called God of War. I completed it with my cousin. It was easy. He died a few times. The hardest guy was Vilgax. But we finished it.

By Leroy.

Once upon a time there was a kakapo. His name was Wacko. He woke up and a seed landed on his head. He said “The sky is falling, the sky is falling.” He fell over Peewee Kiwi. The kiwi came with Wacko. Then they bumped into pukeko, who was called Mrs McKerracher. She came too. Then they walked into stoat. The stoat was called Mr Garner. The stoat led them to his house and all the animals were scared and frightened, but they got free.

By Sophie.

Once upon a time there was a queen. She was evil. She was mean to the princess. “I don’t like the queen” she said, “because she is evil. Tomorrow I am going to go and smash her magic down and I am going to tell her that I am moving out tonight.” “But you can’t.” “But why?” “Because I have magic gates” said the queen. “It is my choice if I want to stay or if I don’t” said the princess.

By Makylah.

Once upon a time there lived a handsome bear. He was looking for his prey. He found a rabbit. He ate him, but he was still hungry. He went to the river to catch some fish. He caught 4 salmon, but he was still hungry. Then he caught 20 salmon and he was full. After 2 months it was Winter so the bear slept in his den. That’s called hibernating.

By Jadyn.

Once upon a time there was a house. A lovely little girl was alone. One Christmas night Santa came there and gave her a big present. When she woke up and went downstairs she had a surprise. She screamed with happiness. Santa gave her some parents. They said “Hi” and told them her name and gave she them a hug.

By Kortney.

Last week I went to Tauranga and Rotorua. We stayed at The Fat Pigeon. There were bunks. Mum slept down the bottom and I slept up the top. There were two homes where people could sleep. It was cool there! There are wee playgrounds and there is a field. I saw two tui. The lake is called Lake Tarawera.    Hannah spent most of the time in the swing. She had tea and she had breakfast in the swing. In the car there was a video player. On the way home we watched Happy Feet. Hannah has a playhouse.

The next day we went home. Hannah and me and Jordan jumped in the car and Hannah was tooting the horn. In the second house the toilet was outside. It’s got pictures. It’s really cool. When we went home that night there was fireworks. Me and Hannah got strawberries.

Jarrod gave me armour for my motorbike. We went on Jarrod’s motorbike. His motorbike is a Kawasaki.

When we went on the plane the pilot told me that I could sit up the front where the pilot sits. Mum took a photo, even with the hat on. They have windows and they slide. There are thousands of buttons. We went on a jet plane.

 Holly went to Australia. She got me a teddy bear and a hat. I had fun there.

By Lochie.

PIRATES

Pirates are terrible people, but these ones are not. They don’t hate people, but they war with other pirates – they’re the terrible ones.

By Kortney

JELLYBEAN

Once there was a jellybean who eats jellybeans for breakfast, lunch, tea and afternoon tea. The jellybean is fat. It has an interesting tray. The jellybean plays with jellybeans. In the end the jellybean found a girl jellybean and they got married.

By Sakari.

WHIO

Blue ducks have a Maori name. It is Whio. The weasels eat the whio’s eggs. They are blue, white and red and they have tags on them. A blue duck is blue, that’s why it’s called a Whio.

By Charlotte.

I’m Jelly Bear and I’m Angry Bird. We live in a tree. We are spying on the green pig. He has made a lazer to destroy Angry Bird Town. Angry Bird destroys the big lazer. Jelly Bear cheered for Angry Bird. What will the pig be up to?

By Joseph.

Blog Comments Challenge

I have got 14 ticks on my chart because I have been writing comments. I love writing comments because it is fun because you get to write anything. It is amazing.

By Patchouli.

KIWI

Kiwi: Kiwi are nocturnal (up all night and sleep all day).

Kiwi: Kiwi are soft (soft feathers).

Kiwi: Kiwi are endangered (not many left).

Kiwi: Kiwi have short wings (so they can’t fly).

By Aneka.

A creeper blew up my house on Minecraft. Then I had 2 and a half hearts. I went to my other house and it was dangerous. Then I smashed the ladders and I wasted my life on Minecraft.

By Trey.

Once upon a time there was a kitten. It was famous. Its mum was too. Then the people came to Cat Town. “Run” said the famous kitten. “Yes” said the mum. “No” said the people, “we want our cat back!”

By Charlotte.

The Mountain Goat

One sunny morning the goat woke up from her sleep. She wasn't sick anymore. She was happy now. She jumped out of her bed and smiled and laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed. Bee said "Hi" to goat. Bird said "Hello". Sun didn't say hello to her. Goat didn't feel happy and cried. Sun didn't mean and felt bad and was sad and cried too. The next day Sun felt very sorry. Sun had got presents . Everyone was surprised.
By Kortney.

FROGS

Once upon a time there were 3 frogs. One frogs name was Hannah. One frogs name was Aneka. One frogs name was Sarah. Hannah and Aneka were mean to Sarah. Hannah and Aneka said “Do the work”, so Sarah did it. But… one day when Hannah and Aneka said “Do the work”, Sarah said “No”.  Hannah and Aneka went to jail and Sarah had a party.

By Hannah.

Once upon a time there were some knights with an archer and a horse. In the castle they had a king and queen. They sent them on dangerous missions to get the gems from the baddies. One day the baddies attacked the castle. The horse and their knights went rushing out of the castle, but they saw one person.

By Alex.

T Ball

On Friday I did catch the ball. That was cool. I said “Yeah, yeah, yeah.” Everyone cheered. I smiled. Xavier and Tim and Kees helped me. We wear uniforms. It says Waimataitai on the back. I was a great catcher – Go me! Then I got a sausage. It had onions on it.

By Cameron.

Clock World

Once upon a time there was a world like no ordinary other. There lived Clock World. The house was made out of clocks. But, one house did not have a person in it. Where did the third person go? He got eaten. Noboby knows who ate him. It’s a mystery.

By Memphis.

CAPTAIN BLACKBEARD

One day there was a bunch of pirates. The pirates were called Ben, Max and Jake and the captain was called Captain Blackbeard. We saw when he was fighting along with his crew, but they were ambushed. The crew died but Captain Blackbeard didn’t get killed. He was lucky. He wanted revenge so when the enemies weren’t looking he jumped on the ship and took everyone out. “Yeah”, he said and he took the ship for himself and he said “I’m going to get some more pirates.”

By Tyler.

The Pirates

Once upon a time there were pirates and a shark. The pirates were silly. One day the leader pirate said “Come up here fat shark”. But he bit the ship. The pirates came again. The pirates caught the shark, but the shark bit the net. Then he bit the ship and it sank!

By Bailey.

Mount Cook

I drove up to Mount Cook  in my Dad’s car. When I got up there there was no snow. I went up for a day. I got a massive cookie. The cookie was very nice. I didn’t know if there was white chocolate in it or not. It was crunchy.

By Toby.

PANDA LAND

Once upon a time there was a forest. It had lots and lots of pandas and bamboo houses. It had some horses as well. The bamboo houses were magic. There was a big forest in between  the horses and the pandas. But, one day the pandas and the horses went for a picnic and they bumped into each other. Bump!!!!!!!!! And they became best friends.

By Sophie.

Once upon a time there was a queen called Mrs McKerracher. She got whatever she wanted. Miss Collins was her best friend. One day Mrs McKerracher said “I need a job, I’m tired of doing nothing. I know I’ll be a teacher. I want to teach at Waimataitai.” She got to teach in Room 21. She had these people in the class: Jadyn, Malakai, Lylan, Beth, Charlotte, Hannah, Sakari, Bailey, Makylah, Leroy, Sarah, Taylah, Jakeb, Aneka, Trey, Tyer, Patchouli, Alex, Sophie, Cameron, Kortney, Memphis, Lucy, Lochie, Toby and Joseph.

Room 21s topic was called Survival. ”Today we are going to learn about albatrosses and after that we are going to learn about kiwis. For writing we are going to write about non-fiction stuff.”(Hannah)”like what?” (Mrs McKerracher)”what about cats and dogs?”

One day I got home and there was a  bunny rabbit!” Yay !!!!!! Its bring your pet to school day. There were lots of interesting pets. The next day it was best pet day. The best pet was Mrs McKerrachers . Her pet was a gold and silver unicorn.

One day Mrs McKerracher got tired of teaching she walked and walked until she bumped into the palace. She sat on her chair and she drifted off to sleep. She woke up and she forgot all about her pet unicorn and then she remembered that she had a pet unicorn. She ran outside and she ran to the school and then she remembered she did take it home, so she ran back to the palace and went to sleep.

The end. By Aneka.

One day a storm came over. It watered the lollipops. It was raining muffins. The people said “Yum, the chocolate muffins are yum”. The little kids “Hey diddley hey, the boy in the haystack. Yeehah!” On the other side of the town it rained hamburgers. The hamburgers squashed the houses. The people said “Oh dear!”

By Toby.

 

Once upon a time there was a Robin and Batman. At a party Batman was having heaps of fun, but the Joker ruined it. Batman was angry. Batman had to go on a mission. Batman had to get Robin, but he forgot that Robin was on holiday. But Batman still did it. His mission was to stop the baddies from getting the shiny key. Batman got them in time.

By Alex.

 

One day an old man was working at the carnival at the beach. But one night he needed to fix the haunted ride, and no one was there. He ran away screaming because all the rides came alive. The old man ran away to get the manager.

By Tyler.

 

Once upon a time there were two queens. One was a nice one and one was a bad one. The baby queen was playing and the mum said “stop playing”. The mum was very mean.

By Taylah.

 

A long time ago there lived a giant. The giant’s friend was Makylah. She liked playing boy get girl. They lived in a cottage by the forest. One day Makylah said “I’ll go and give Mum some pancakes”. When Makylah was going to her Mum, she saw her Mum come to her house.

By Patchouli.

 

Bob stopped to let the penguins cross the road. They were on their way to Waimataitai School. When the penguins went to school they played on the big adventure. They went to Room 21 and played and learnt. One went to the swimming pool and he went on the hydroslide.

By Hannah

  SPIDERMAN’S PET

One day a man had magical powers. His name was Spiderman. He was looking for a pet but he couldn’t find one. He found a frog but ‘no too boring’. He found a mouse but ‘no to noisy’. He found a spider and he loved it. So he bought it.

By Tyler.

Once upon a time there was an alien. It can fly around the planet in one minute. It was kind to the other aliens. The other alien is not nice to the other lands with the aliens. The mean alien lives on one planet. It is green. The nice one can go on a skateboard. It lost its batteries. It could not find any. But then he found one and then he knew not to give up and he didn't give up. It was very quiet by himself. The mean aliens were watching him. He did not know they were trying to shoot at him.
It is part two now:
There were other animals racing around him. He was thinking to chop them with his sword. He got lost in a cave. There were bats in the cave. A dinosaur lived in the cave. The dinosaur started to wake up. It was a surprise for him. The dinosaur raced after him.
By Alex.

Once upon a time there was a place called Sparkle Land. There were sparkle people. There was a king and a queen and a princess baby. The princess was called Sleeping Beauty. She was beautiful. Her skin was as white as snow.

By Makylah.

 

Once a long, long time ago there was a war with the  decepticons and the autobots. Claws is a decepticon and he is invincible.

By Leroy.

On Saturday I went to Bailey’s birthday and we had cake. It was chocolate and it was yummy. When we played tag. Then we had lollies. Then we played crocodile tag. I gave Bailey Batman lego and it came with Catwoman. Batman has a light and the light hits Catwoman.

By Trey.

 

Once upon a time there was a land called Crystal Land. Everything was crystal shape. The princess had a magic wand and only the princess and queen could use it. The king always sends the princess to her room because the king was a very grumpy man.

By Sophie.

A long time ago there were four caterpillars. Daddy caterpillar went to a precious work. Mummy stayed home and looked after baby caterpillar. Big sister caterpillar went to a jolly school. Big sister ate food for lunch and learnt maths like 612 + 100 = 712. Mummy caterpillar loved looking after baby caterpillar. “I love baby caterpillar. Daddy caterpillar loves his work. So do I.”

By Beth.

Tomorrow I might go to Hannah’s house. We will play in the tree hut. I haven’t been to Hannah’s house before. We will play pirates and princesses. We are going to play another game. It is called dress-up. The most fun thing is bouncing on the bed!!! We will have a fantastic time.

By Aneka.

  

Once upon a  time there was a magic dark castle. There was a farm next to it. It had some animals. The dark caste was haunted. It had a wild dragon at the door. It was growly. Then there was a lion and a giant bat and a ghost. The farmer came to visit the dark castle. He was scared. He ran away screaming “Arghhh!”

By Bailey.

Once upon a time there was a world unlike any other. It was called Butterfly Land. The people were made of candy. The pets were made of candy too. When it was Winter the people died.

By Patchouli.

Once upon a time there lived some girls called Beth and Sarah. There was a boy called Leroy and a girl called Aneka. They were looking for scorpions. “We have a fancy truck with koru windows” said Beth.

By Sarah.

Once upon a time there were 4 people. “Ow” said a man called Prowler. “My  bum, it hurts so much”. “Oh! A slide”. So Claw climbed up it. “Can you help me fly?” “OK, I’ll push you”.  “OK, wait”. “What?” “I am never going to let go of your foot”.

“Just let go Claw. No, I am too young to die”. “You’re not going to die. No you’re just going to get hurt” said Closs. “No! Aah! Wah! Ow”.

By Tyler.

Once upon a time there was a world called Bedland. In Bedland we sleep all day. In my sleep I dream about dragons.

By Jakeb.

THE WOLF AND THE FOX FIGHT
They had a fight, then the werewolf faught an elephant. The werewolf won and the werewolf went off into the forest with the fox. The werewolf saw the turtle. The turtle hid inside its shell. Then it came out of its shell and ran off into the sea. Then the turtle swam off to another island with other foxes and wolves. And then the wolves and foxes came and ate up the turtle. Then the bear came and scared away all the animals off into the jungle again. Then they saw a monkey and it was in a coconut tree. Then a tiger appeared and lots of other animals escaped from the zoo. So, they all went to the bear and did their loudest roar. It was so loud it made the bear stare at all the other animals jaws. Then he roared so loud that they pushed him onto a log. They never saw him again. Then time went past. The ice had appeared on top of the water. The bear ran off and told his friends it was time to use their giant roars, "And we will become the greatest animals of all time". All the other animals said that to their friends/
TO BE CONTINUED.
CONTINUED...
As the wolf and the fox slept, a snake and a lizard had a fight and made so much noice that it woke them up. The lizard walked backwards into goo and became an acid lizard, and unstoppable. Then more animals become under the acid lizards control, including the wolf and the fox, but not the bear. Then a dinosaur appeared. The bear was still on a different island. He was going to come back after a human has come to him. The dinosaur is going to use his big legs and attack all the bears, and one will probably escape. One did escape. It was the leader bear. His name was Killer. And there were some more bears hiding in caves. The dinosaur then went to the other island. More dinosaurs came to the island and decided to kill everything in sight. The leading dinosaur told the animals that he has been sending his dinosaur troops to other islands to destroy the buildings. The wolf and the fox were the only ones who could help this problem. The dinosaurs are going to destroy every island. And the monkey is going to get to see these problems. The bear is going to help them. They travelled long. It might take so long that the island will freeze, and everyone on the island. The dinosaurs have pretty much destroyed the planet by now. But the water and they couldn't move their legs, only shake them a teency bit.
THE END

I went to Bailey’s birthday. I went down the bouncy slide. It was fun. I bought him a race car. It had orange flames. He turned 7!Once upon a time there was a Seal and a Crab. They lived in the sparkly blue ocean. But, one day some pirates were angry so they decided to catch a fish for tea. Instead they caught the Seal! He was so scared. He yelled “Help, help, help!!!” Crab came. He said “I will get help”. So he went and tried to get help, but he could not find anyone. All he could find was his mother and father. He said “Mother, father, help Seal with me please”. They said “OK”. So they followed their son Crab. All together they used their claws to cut seal free. They put a plastic seal in the net and they popped it. They went flying off. Seal, Crab, Mrs Crab and Mr Crab never saw the pirates again. “Thank you Mrs Crab. Thank you Mr Crab”. “Crab, time for tea”. “Yes Mum” said Seal.  

By Joseph.

At reading Cameron fell over. Cameron’s tooth fell out. He had to go to the dentist.

By Kortney

Once upon a time there was a castle and an army and a dragon. A person was locked up in the dungeons. One of the dungeons was open. The person climbed out of the dungeon. The knights rammed into the army. The horses got a fright.

By Toby.

Once there was a double decker bus. It was the best bus ever!!! It could go over seas and the best thing about it is the outside because it could change colours and it sparkles a lot. The bus driver said “should I sell this double decker bus?”

By Aneka.

Once upon a time there was a crystal. It was the Queens. The Queen came in. “Where is my crystal?” she said. “Someone must have stolen it. I’m going to go and find it”.  The Queen found the crystal in an old man’s old wrinkly hand. He ran away! The Queen said “Abracadabra, Alacazam, Make Me Fast” The Queen got the crystal.

By Makylah.

I’m going to Bailey’s birthday. I will buy him some super-hero lego. It will go with the Incredible Hulk. He is awesome. I will also buy him a car too. We might play musical chairs.

By Memphis.

In the week-end Dad can’t pick me up after school because he is going to Christchurch to watch the rugby. It is Ireland vs the All Blacks. My cousin is in the All Blacks. Dad and Staz have just been to Ireland. Now Staz is going to pick me up. I reckon the All Blacks are going to win.

By Lochie.

Once upon a time there was a land you have never been to before. There were butterflies and balloons and lollypops too. I ate one. It was good. Mrs McKerracher was there too. We saw a castle.

By Cameron.